It's quite hard to understand the movement of your elevator as some of the structures are not fully developed in your sketchup model. I believe that your image captures tells more about design concept of the elevator. I think you should focus more on the elevator's pathway in relation to the structures.
Wow!!! you definately put a lot of time and effort in your projects which will get you good marks for projects. The animation is a little too long, it needs context in the background just to show the relationship it has with the building/meeting space. You can also change the shape of it.
On the positive side of things your latest image captures show that you are creating and carving into spaces to make a unique architecture of your own. Maybe a little less texture so that light and space are a more defined.
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It's quite hard to understand the movement of your elevator as some of the structures are not fully developed in your sketchup model. I believe that your image captures tells more about design concept of the elevator. I think you should focus more on the elevator's pathway in relation to the structures.
Wow!!! you definately put a lot of time and effort in your projects which will get you good marks for projects.
The animation is a little too long, it needs context in the background just to show the relationship it has with the building/meeting space. You can also change the shape of it.
On the positive side of things your latest image captures show that you are creating and carving into spaces to make a unique architecture of your own. Maybe a little less texture so that light and space are a more defined.
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